Don't hate me cause i Beauty Flow

CopyPat · 10-24-2013, 03:15 PM

i never punctuate properly, forever understate. probably better run away, copy be yellin "andale!!" all of these texters dumb and they always be gettin stuck, they ain't got the speed. catchin up to stay on to me, best of luck.. i change constantly. exit brah, you ain't on the scene, i am the stud, you ain't hardly steed. i met a bunch a great nominees for bestest buds and they honor me by pressin stuff when they on the keys, excellunce when they on NC's..impressed with us? we make quality threads and must remain top of thee present hump of this colony gettin up with technology.
im talkin internet rap boarders who rockin computers. and rock a fitted red hat sorta cocky and stupid. i log in, sit on my ass more and talk like i do this, but copy isn't yet that sort of obvious loser... god im just beauty

Neighbor · 10-24-2013, 04:16 PM

This was fun

Whole first half was pretty much fire, despite you not even trying lol

We've really gotta get a cypher going soon, man

Rawn MD · 10-24-2013, 05:24 PM

Dope scheming

Read smoothly and was funny

Not the best copy, but not bad

I always enjoy reading ur sht

Dove Dozer · 10-25-2013, 07:53 AM

Nice flex. Im on that scheming shit now, formatting for audio.

Dove Dozer · 10-25-2013, 07:53 AM

Oh and i got some new gear, ready to record if your down to collab

zygote · 10-25-2013, 09:25 AM

Good writing CopyPat although perhaps you should set yourself a minimum word limit for these, or like hold onto the short ones and combine them later. Half of the fun reading it seems to be in the increasing momentum of the rhyme schemes etc, and that seems difficult with only a few lines. The steed line was a good wordplay enjoy similes like that, that line was both an easy connection and entertaining.

Certain · 10-26-2013, 06:22 AM

I agree with ZYG (whose name was better as zygote). Expand and dilate. When flow is such an important part of a verse, giving us such a short snippet barely allows us to pick it up before it's over. I liked that this was about us. A few of the rhymes were clunkier than normal, but you're good at this style.

Geno · 10-26-2013, 12:39 PM

Always a good read. Dope shit copy. Slayed the schemes

Zen · 10-27-2013, 07:01 PM

Flow comes effortless to you. Pieces like this are one of the reasons you're one of my favorites to read. Can't remember if I told you or not but I peeped your audio too. Dope shit there as well lol. Back to this piece, your content is always light and humorous which is a nice change of pace to the om which is usually full of "I hate myself" or "someone died wahhh wahhh wahh". Keep being pat.

10-24-2013, 03:15 PM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Don't hate me cause i Beauty Flow i never punctuate properly, forever understate. probably better run away, copy be yellin "andale!!" all of these texters dumb and they always be gettin stuck, they ain't got the speed. catchin up to stay on to me, best of luck.. i change constantly. exit brah, you ain't on the scene, i am the stud, you ain't hardly steed. i met a bunch a great nominees for bestest buds and they honor me by pressin stuff when they on the keys, excellunce when they on NC's..impressed with us? we make quality threads and must remain top of thee present hump of this colony gettin up with technology. im talkin internet rap boarders who rockin computers. and rock a fitted red hat sorta cocky and stupid. i log in, sit on my ass more and talk like i do this, but copy isn't yet that sort of obvious loser... god im just beauty __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-24-2013, 04:16 PM	#2
Neighbor Genghis Khan Vuitton Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,303 Battle Record: 30-10 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Pic Key Grand Prix - 1-2 Season 1 - Newbie Tournament II - Fight Night LXII - Fight Night XLII - Fight Night XXXIII - Fight Night XXVI - BA Swag & Flow - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - Netcees Battle League(2x) - BA Slugfest II - Fight Night of Champions - Fight Night LXXXIII - Summer Classic X Rep Power: 34764471	This was fun Whole first half was pretty much fire, despite you not even trying lol We've really gotta get a cypher going soon, man __________________ Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact

10-24-2013, 05:24 PM	#3
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	Dope scheming Read smoothly and was funny Not the best copy, but not bad I always enjoy reading ur sht __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

10-25-2013, 07:53 AM	#4
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Nice flex. Im on that scheming shit now, formatting for audio. __________________

10-25-2013, 07:53 AM	#5
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Oh and i got some new gear, ready to record if your down to collab __________________

10-25-2013, 09:25 AM	#6
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Good writing CopyPat although perhaps you should set yourself a minimum word limit for these, or like hold onto the short ones and combine them later. Half of the fun reading it seems to be in the increasing momentum of the rhyme schemes etc, and that seems difficult with only a few lines. The steed line was a good wordplay enjoy similes like that, that line was both an easy connection and entertaining.

10-26-2013, 06:22 AM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I agree with ZYG (whose name was better as zygote). Expand and dilate. When flow is such an important part of a verse, giving us such a short snippet barely allows us to pick it up before it's over. I liked that this was about us. A few of the rhymes were clunkier than normal, but you're good at this style. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-26-2013, 12:39 PM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Always a good read. Dope shit copy. Slayed the schemes __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-27-2013, 07:01 PM	#9
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Flow comes effortless to you. Pieces like this are one of the reasons you're one of my favorites to read. Can't remember if I told you or not but I peeped your audio too. Dope shit there as well lol. Back to this piece, your content is always light and humorous which is a nice change of pace to the om which is usually full of "I hate myself" or "someone died wahhh wahhh wahh". Keep being pat.

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