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Old 10-22-2013, 06:52 PM   #1
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I should be hidden or cryptic
upset off of diminished prescriptions
living in Venice..can I- get a witness?
the flow alone uplifted the city..
written by Egyptians too quickly
shifting pristine thought, through each 16 I jot
robbin' your sidekicks of life when they get these bars
make my bat mobile then it's lifting off
let's get it crackin' if they ever piss me off
fictitious ideals is all they convince me of
it looks like business is picking up...
I told em' this is my area, quoted 51
so they know the secrets based off reality
damn...how you even gonna channel me?
walls get Berlin treatment without the technicality
the great calamity, and you just Jane doe's
keep wishing for a break and keep a Buddhist saint close
I rub my belly, watch the telly, dude's is smelly
I'm so bored but there ain't much you could tell me
cause most of these written's seem gay to me
I'm sad, because no one want's to play with me
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Old 10-23-2013, 07:29 PM   #2
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make my bat mobile then it's lifting off
let's get it crackin' if they ever piss me off
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it looks like business is picking up...

word keep unfolding and scrolling
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Old 10-24-2013, 01:58 AM   #3
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Old 10-28-2013, 02:07 PM   #4
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