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Old 08-21-2013, 03:01 PM   #1
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already been established I spazz and get it cracking
and I aint even talking the ratchet and semi packing
so don't you even think about asking if he's a has been
or compare me to any fire less' it's matched against a dragon
clever in my nice steez, never in a tight squeeze
lyrically, I could semi backflip out of a chimney backwards
my parent thesis, I'll son (anyone in any bracket)
swag&flow? the best of bothworlds w/o taggin Lenny Kravitz
ya'll can Dodge these #44 magz, but I'll keep Ramming the Issue
though I'd rather be with Cameron Nichols programming a missile
like dethroning myself is a loss to me
my state of mind borders crazy, go head and get cross with me
when it came to you, used to stick my neck out like Chris Bosch
now I'm think you 2wo pussy whenever you hit the inbox
got a hunned throw away lines that a transit addict couldn't sniff
ya'll too wrapped up in this shit, you want the package or the gift?
sipping on crown royal and my chalice overfloweth with wine
lick my lips and salvage the taste of hate that's gotten bolder with time
seeing all the nonsense force fed but I'm a conscious war head
far as conforming.. I'm a rebel and wouldn't be caught dead
The Predator with metaphors, what you thought? I'm the best
and besides I'm too shrewd of dude to get caught up in the net
the 4th Secret of Fatima
play round the world with Galileo and beat em flat out while making him a believer
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Old 08-21-2013, 03:26 PM   #3
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i've always fucked with ur writing. taking the impression you sound/read almost like an emcee, Alpo. to me at least. when you weave in a knowledgeable allusion -- i dig that, if it doesn't resonate it should prompt a google-search, though searching the memory banks first a better move. when you namecheck... idgaf, prolly cuz it's often lost on me (got the Kravitz line though). you boast good wordplay, flow, swagger, even content when you want. writing is fresh, overall, you nice with it.
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