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Conflicted about this one booth . Just a Lil bit. Not much. I think it's because after "Seed" I expect so much.
Started off dope as fuck Then a Lil ways in. Ima listen n let u know exactly what moment I'm talking about ..but it got a Lil choppy. Not the flow but the whole momentum of the track. But it quickly became unnoticeable n you finished well. But I feel as if I gotta let you know regardless. Yknow? Edit: 0:38 - 0:45 somewhere was a shaky transition For the most part i like this tho. Just bein overly critical I suppose but u my nigga I gotta give u that real
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word i mean 'now here you are' doesnt rhyme with anything so thats prolly where it sounds weird
but thanks breh i agree this aint no seed but i did it earlier today and i thought it turned out cool |
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I'll peep this in a bit.. Dilla has always been one of my favorite producers.. I'm curious on how you executed it.
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More like veggie tale faggit bullshit
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LMAO
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liked it
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