Week 1 Discussion Thread - Page 5

Coup · 07-27-2013, 12:56 PM

edit
thank you

Adonis · 07-27-2013, 06:09 PM

So after coup and Rawn mentioned me changing from 1st to 2nd person and shit I went to read it.

You're wrong.

"A whore monger"...not saying the or he's, not saying I'm either. Just "A".

Essentially, it was first person entirely. Because all those "a" sentences were referring to myself, then I said I or I've a few times. Don't matter tho.

Good looks boys

A right winger is "I'm a right winger" minus the first word

07-27-2013, 06:14 PM

U start in 3rd bc the 'i' has not been mentioned it's more a neutral tense then 3rd but u get what I'm saying I think @Adonis (that's why I said it still worked)

Pent uP · 07-27-2013, 07:12 PM

I feel bad cuz I dropped a vote on inno/fig but i guess it was a landslide. I just wanted to tackle it cuz it had 7 responses.

sorry to the other guys i couldve read up on instead

Pent uP · 07-27-2013, 07:13 PM

Also @Mike Wrecka please spell my name right when posting threads.

Pent uP

07-27-2013, 09:02 PM

@zygote and @Mike Wrecka
do new matches go up tonight or tomorrow?

Nigma · 07-27-2013, 09:58 PM

@Coup damn blown away by that no show love homie respect and appreciate it.
@Que whatsup man good to see you around and droppin votes, you gonna hop in the competition at all tho? Should go sign in imo

Inno · 07-27-2013, 11:16 PM

Sorry for slacking foreal I will get votes in tonight.

Also.

Any care to tell me exactly what grammar errors I have

Because I do fucking spell check godam it lol.

So it most be punctuation.

This is not a rant or me complaining about votes..no way

Just trying to improve my writing.

07-28-2013, 01:19 AM

I got u @Innovator

I tired to b as constructive as possible, so don't take me thing the wrong way.
If u need clarification on anything just shoot a pm n I got u.
Hope it helped.

Adonis · 07-28-2013, 10:45 AM

Ill peep urs @Innovator

Camping now though
@Mike Wrecka @zygote

Clock work nucka. Lego!!

Inno · 07-28-2013, 12:07 PM

@Rawn M.D.

Thansk man preciate that feed it really does help
And noe I see what im doing wrong.alot of laziness on part tbh.
Alot trivial punctuation mistakes I shouldn't be making.

Thanks again rawn

Adonis thank you aswell.

And pent up who got me curious with his vote lol.

Voting now

Mike Wrecka · 07-28-2013, 04:39 PM

great week 1 guys. voting was on point and we actually had one battle end in a 4-4 tie. which tbh feels right for that battle.

07-28-2013, 06:00 PM

When r next week's matches going @Mike Wrecka @zygote

Fig · 07-28-2013, 06:07 PM

I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today....

07-28-2013, 06:08 PM

Ya I don't think matches should b closed for votes till next week is going up tbh

Objective · 07-28-2013, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Figurative

I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today....

I thought I had the rest of the day to vote as well, so I only got one or two votes in, not sure. But ye, it is what it is. ^^

Fig · 07-28-2013, 06:12 PM

@Innovator yo sorry for not coming with my best effort in this battle. Its been quite literaly the most intense week of my life and i did as much as i.could with how much time i had

To everyone else, i will be comin hard from now on, so suckadick

07-28-2013, 06:24 PM

@Innovator @Figurative

if ether of u want to vote on me and @Pent uP battle in here that's alright as long as he don't object

07-28-2013, 06:26 PM

Or better yet @Meth @Sharp Nine @Mike Wrecka @Knucklehead @zygote @namix @trap can one of u reopen the threads till next week is ready so ppl cane vote that need or want to?

Sharp · 07-28-2013, 07:02 PM

wait

you guys closed a battle as a tie?

07-27-2013, 12:56 PM	#81
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	edit thank you Last edited by Coup; 07-27-2013 at 01:44 PM.

07-27-2013, 06:09 PM	#82
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	So after coup and Rawn mentioned me changing from 1st to 2nd person and shit I went to read it. You're wrong. "A whore monger"...not saying the or he's, not saying I'm either. Just "A". Essentially, it was first person entirely. Because all those "a" sentences were referring to myself, then I said I or I've a few times. Don't matter tho. Good looks boys A right winger is "I'm a right winger" minus the first word __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-27-2013, 09:58 PM	#87
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	@Coup damn blown away by that no show love homie respect and appreciate it. @Que whatsup man good to see you around and droppin votes, you gonna hop in the competition at all tho? Should go sign in imo __________________

07-28-2013, 10:45 AM	#90
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Ill peep urs @Innovator Camping now though @Mike Wrecka @zygote Clock work nucka. Lego!! __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-28-2013, 04:39 PM	#92
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	great week 1 guys. voting was on point and we actually had one battle end in a 4-4 tie. which tbh feels right for that battle. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

07-27-2013, 06:14 PM	#83
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	U start in 3rd bc the 'i' has not been mentioned it's more a neutral tense then 3rd but u get what I'm saying I think @Adonis (that's why I said it still worked)

07-27-2013, 07:12 PM	#84
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	I feel bad cuz I dropped a vote on inno/fig but i guess it was a landslide. I just wanted to tackle it cuz it had 7 responses. sorry to the other guys i couldve read up on instead

07-27-2013, 07:13 PM	#85
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Also @Mike Wrecka please spell my name right when posting threads. Pent uP

07-27-2013, 09:02 PM	#86
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	@zygote and @Mike Wrecka do new matches go up tonight or tomorrow?

07-27-2013, 11:16 PM	#88
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Sorry for slacking foreal I will get votes in tonight. Also. Any care to tell me exactly what grammar errors I have Because I do fucking spell check godam it lol. So it most be punctuation. This is not a rant or me complaining about votes..no way Just trying to improve my writing.

07-28-2013, 01:19 AM	#89
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	I got u @Innovator I tired to b as constructive as possible, so don't take me thing the wrong way. If u need clarification on anything just shoot a pm n I got u. Hope it helped.

07-28-2013, 12:07 PM	#91
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	@Rawn M.D. Thansk man preciate that feed it really does help And noe I see what im doing wrong.alot of laziness on part tbh. Alot trivial punctuation mistakes I shouldn't be making. Thanks again rawn Adonis thank you aswell. And pent up who got me curious with his vote lol. Voting now

07-28-2013, 06:00 PM	#93
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	When r next week's matches going @Mike Wrecka @zygote

07-28-2013, 06:07 PM	#94
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today.... __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

07-28-2013, 06:08 PM	#95
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	Ya I don't think matches should b closed for votes till next week is going up tbh

07-28-2013, 06:12 PM	#97
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	@Innovator yo sorry for not coming with my best effort in this battle. Its been quite literaly the most intense week of my life and i did as much as i.could with how much time i had To everyone else, i will be comin hard from now on, so suckadick __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

07-28-2013, 06:24 PM	#98
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	@Innovator @Figurative if ether of u want to vote on me and @Pent uP battle in here that's alright as long as he don't object

07-28-2013, 06:26 PM	#99
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	Or better yet @Meth @Sharp Nine @Mike Wrecka @Knucklehead @zygote @namix @trap can one of u reopen the threads till next week is ready so ppl cane vote that need or want to? Last edited by Rawn M.D.; 07-28-2013 at 06:30 PM.

07-28-2013, 07:02 PM	#100
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	wait you guys closed a battle as a tie?

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