show me an S&F swaggier and flowier than this

[namix]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

Haven't read the topic past this point, but I'm a bit hurt. I know I trolled you previously, but I respect you. You're not my cup of tea as an OM writer, but this is a bridge too far. This is almost out of character for you. And lumping me in with Sey (as a boarder) is a bit much.

We should collab. Srs.

i just been in battle mode because of the PR tourney

you somehow made me feel bad now, you're good at what you do, pancake lol

[Nigma]

@oXus we should be friends.

[Seyance]

sad weirdo scrub, you know grammar policing is literally the most played to death pathetic way of replying to posts ever. is that what constitutes as a noble pursuit for you?

obviously it's liked in general, so is 2 chains and wocka.

[Cashius]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=16706

[~RustyGunZ~]

it was dope tbh

been listening to bronson today and it would be dope on his type beats

[Seyance]

i had just read that when i stepped into this thread, which is why i couldn't understand the difficulty of finding something better. will feed it later @Cashius

[Eŋg]

it's ok guy, really. i'm not going to sit here and discuss craft with my florid analogy then immediately take the defensive when called out on a grammatical fundamental. like i could gaf, really (shoulda used a question mark and didn't need the word 'as' in your last post).

it's not you, it's me. always. and forever.

[Seyance]

wait a minute, are you not the same person I caught biting verses? it seems like grammar policing has taken over from stealing other peoples verses as your newest noble pursuit. post another track to get ridiculed or tell me how many capital letters i'm missing, you freak.

[Eŋg]

uhm. what?!

i'm not as think as you drunk i am.

i'm pretty sure my sex-ed teacher wasn't a virgin. y'know.

[Seyance]

biters go on ignore, you don't deserve to be heard scrub.

[PancakeBrah]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=17244

[PancakeBrah]

The King is mathematically affixed; no man has a known plan or schematic that's equipped
to throw hands, I'm Gohan; I'll throw one death stare that'll snap your femur in half with a twitch
My whole team is nabbing at the bit, I'm the touch of God as a weapon of no remorse
Leave you slumped in the yard with a queen attached to my hip while we're stepping over your corpse
Close range, the bullet's frame rate slows when the scope is aimed and leaves a hole when it's done
And as your soul escapes I'll watch it elevate at the same pace as the float off the smoke of the gun
I'll sidestep Pryde's death. Let's talk about me. Sovereign, the King, netcee's Charlie Kaufman indeed
Taking the site over, type cold I stole the deed while GoW tried to breathe coughing off the smoke of his weed
I pen gully tacks, dubbed as rap, writing better than you with something new everyday, slammed
Clear the deck, I say fuck a tap, I'll power clean a whole keg and make the brew do a Cakestand
I said; I'M TYPE COLD I...I'll...I'll a write a verse of the week spazzin', voter's a clown dude's type
I'm bipolar, I reek havoc. Both of my personas speak in third person and rhyme diameters around you like
"Pan a merk you. I'm a 4chan commercial, bezerk, seeing blue spots off of the strands of herbals
Pan is yelling at this imaginary buzzsaw, PAN CANNOT WORK YOU, so instead Pan will just use Pan's hands to hurt you
while talking to Spanish gerbils. Pan will jam his thumbs into your eyes until your glands are purple,
PAN IS CRAZY PAN JUST RHYMED WITH PUR-" "Cake is serious. Cake thinks Pryde's game is broke,
Cake will kick Pryde's wack ass with enough backlash that Pryde'll be back to the time when his typo name was dope
Cake's going to race troll. Pryde will go apeshit and all, Cake will shoot off when dude rages in typeface,
Then Cake's going to shapeshift through walls and moonwalk over Pryde's black self in Michael Jackson whiteface."
Pancake is a King, like Pancake said. You're a raging faggot going through his hype phase.

[namix]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

The King is mathematically affixed; no man has a known plan or schematic that's equipped
to throw hands, I'm Gohan; I'll throw one death stare that'll snap your femur in half with a twitch
My whole team is nabbing at the bit, I'm the touch of God as a weapon of no remorse
Leave you slumped in the yard with a queen attached to my hip while we're stepping over your corpse
Close range, the bullet's frame rate slows when the scope is aimed and leaves a hole when it's done
And as your soul escapes I'll watch it elevate at the same pace as the float off the smoke of the gun
I'll sidestep Pryde's death. Let's talk about me. Sovereign, the King, netcee's Charlie Kaufman indeed
Taking the site over, type cold I stole the deed while GoW tried to breathe coughing off the smoke of his weed
I pen gully tacks, dubbed as rap, writing better than you with something new everyday, slammed
Clear the deck, I say fuck a tap, I'll power clean a whole keg and make the brew do a Cakestand
I said; I'M TYPE COLD I...I'll...I'll a write a verse of the week spazzin', voter's a clown dude's type
I'm bipolar, I reek havoc. Both of my personas speak in third person and rhyme diameters around you like
"Pan a merk you. I'm a 4chan commercial, bezerk, seeing blue spots off of the strands of herbals
Pan is yelling at this imaginary buzzsaw, PAN CANNOT WORK YOU, so instead Pan will just use Pan's hands to hurt you
while talking to Spanish gerbils. Pan will jam his thumbs into your eyes until your glands are purple,
PAN IS CRAZY PAN JUST RHYMED WITH PUR-" "Cake is serious. Cake thinks Pryde's game is broke,
Cake will kick Pryde's wack ass with enough backlash that Pryde'll be back to the time when his typo name was dope
Cake's going to race troll. Pryde will go apeshit and all, Cake will shoot off when dude rages in typeface,
Then Cake's going to shapeshift through walls and moonwalk over Pryde's black self in Michael Jackson whiteface."
Pancake is a King, like Pancake said. You're a raging faggot going through his hype phase.

it was worth the read and showed flashes of strong imagery (e.g. soul elevate at the pace of the float off smoke) and then sometimes your scheme was dope i thought --- when setup strong inners and have like call backs a couple lines down (if thats what they're called), there are a couple times you did that really dope... sometimes the flow wasnt as dope to me as others, but its S&F and i mean the flow never falls off that bad --- good concepts though for a S&F - your concepts are actually more developed than most snf verses i read, but again, i havent read many.

good shit man... i still think rawn's shit was dope though, surprised you dont kinda

[Pent uP]

Id ask to join the ranks of that 3v3 but I dont want half the ppl involved banned so theres that

[PancakeBrah]

PENT WOULD BE ON MY TEAM BECAUSE ME AND PENT ARE DRUNK NETCEE'S FRIENDS.

[Pent uP]

Its true but your recent sobriety is detrimental to our collaboration

[PancakeBrah]

im drunk currently

[Neighbor]

I AM SWAG & FLOW

[Boredom]

twas dope @Rawn

[Seyance]

lets do it no perma ban then, me, pent and pan vs rawn, aero, nam.