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I love the scrutiny; very meticulous; and rightfully so
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Ya'll sleeping on Frank's verse honestly. Shame on you lazy ducks.
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It's a GREAT verse.
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I have, but while initially reading I did not
But it's clear as day now, only still a bit vague. I think his verse persists more to the first part of topic, not so much the end of humanity part or whatever the 2nd part says
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haha, dope quote
honestly though, my comp stays open while I work and sleep, so the last page I was viewing could potentially be open for a good 2 days. not fun when you forget to turn the volume down and come home to porn finished downloading and playing loud as hell...no bueno at all
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Well he actually did edit the quote at the beginning of his post but it could be argued that the end of humanity was allowing human beings to go freeze in the street. Least that's how I see it. I loved Frank's verse this week but it's gotten allot of negative feedback.
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I had to lose everything...
before I discovered my worth. I get it now. Why I had to go through all of this. Thank you father.. . After reading Frank's verse, the turmoil of this past year in my life, makes sense. It's good grief for me. I understand self inflicted suffering, and going through the stages, of blaming mistakes on God before you man up. The inner battles you have to go through before you stop squandering your life, crawling forward until you can walk again, free... How many of us... really use our talents to better the next man? If everyone started doing that the world as we know it would end. It'd be like heaven. |
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I'd say maybe 2%. And it'd be awesome to live in Heaven but this is probably Hell if it does exist. I was thinking about that the other day that Lucifer/Satan whatever you wanna call him said it's better to rule in Hell than serve in Heaven and you look at the earth and what we're doing....it's kind of a perfect example of what Satan would want lol. I know I went off on a tangent. It happens.
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A short story week would be awesome, I know they don't rhyme, but who ever said our pieces had to rhyme? That's just something that occurred naturally because of the fact this is a hip hop website. Just an idea though because I know there may be a lot who don't like it at all.
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short stories?
I would play, but it would rhyme. Basically be a topical story line in rhymes with dialogue.
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Id be down for short stories lol.. Sounds sick axtually.. Maybe we could have a separate aection for them thoughh
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sounds like a breeding ground for no shows to me /oldmanpessimism
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Wtf @ 25 pages of discussion a week. You guys are crazy haha
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Also; what is a Dagel?
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I think years working with Korean ladies who speak broken english helped me understand what some people were meaning to say =)
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How about a tag week?
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I won by no show and voted 5 times.
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