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08-14-2014, 12:50 PM
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Back again.
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 2,653
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Well then bodey you are a lost soul and meth is very worried.
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08-14-2014, 12:55 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 14,165
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08-14-2014, 01:59 PM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)
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Battle Fig in the BA !
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08-14-2014, 02:01 PM
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Om
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 6,461
Battle Record: 8-16
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Yeah I'll totally show...
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08-14-2014, 02:12 PM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)
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08-14-2014, 05:42 PM
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Leave you flatlined.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 5,108
Battle Record: 12-9
Champed - Site Diss 2013
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Badi Alli I'm only joking with you. Your verse wasn't bad it's just the whole production and delivery felt rushed. You have a unique voice.
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08-14-2014, 06:38 PM
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DA GOD
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Canton Ohio
Posts: 12,362
Battle Record: 1-0
Champed - Beat Battle II
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buy a mic.
get a 100 dollar condensor or whatever (not dynamic) microphone, its all you need. you can get any recording program free. whether you are serious, or rapping is just a hobby, you should still have some type of home setup. the more you record the better you will get. your not gonna make any significant strides if your just rapping into your phone with a beat playing in the background humans have brains that learn things. thats why i hate text so much. you are conditioning your brain to write text raps. not real raps. not you bodey, you are conditioning your brain to one take verses, which is fine, but you havent conditioned it in the area of writing a real solid verse without even listening to the track you mention, i guarantee there are lines that are too long where you gotta pick up the speed to fit it, or shit where you slow down, instead of having consistent flow if you could record for real when you keep tripping over a line you could tweak it from the get go, instead of just fixing your delivery to put the line in the key to real rap is dont force it. 99 percent of amateur rappers try and get too deep. oh i can't cut this line its DOPE. no its not. its fucking trash. i dont care if you figure out the cure for cancer in a bar, if it dont sound natural when you spit it, cut that shit. it ruined any sense of dopeness. your better off having a wack line that flows, then a dope line that doesnt. quit conditioning and repeating things the wrong way. the more you do something the wrong way the harder it is to do it the right way.
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599682 |
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08-14-2014, 09:11 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599682 |
bod will u mry bb da bb
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