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[Zen]

Circle jerk? Fuck you guize.

[Just Write]

I liked it, I thought it had it's stand outs and its dull moments. Like what i did right there ;) you know you do

[Sick]

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"The chicken crossed the road but actually didn't, I did.."

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Natural

What's really funny is people actually Dick ride this paragraph form spew of half abstract ideas and half filler. This shit would never fit in sync with a beat and it doesn't come close to embodying anything near core hip hop. Its people like you...vulger....pancake....baby...bwhaha who make text a truely alianated art form. When it should just be a small variation of real rap(audio).
You have some clever shit sometimes, I'm nobody to say you don't...
but these flashes of brilliance you have get way too much publicity.

I don't know a lot of text sites left today that would consider this dope.
I'm sure you'll hate on this opinion, but deep down you know I'm the truth.

Hi hater.

How many dicks.would u suck to get as much notoriety as a dull boy piece?


Congrays on the rape.


Aside from that


This shit was ok..... i read it.....

I hated the whole jaime kennedy section....blegh

Prior an after were alright......i guess we will never quite measure up to you tho dull....

VINTA......

Ahhh....it just feels uninspired at this point.

[Saila]

I liked this actually. Don't take this the wrong way, but it came off like you had no end game in sight, and just went with what came to mind, and typed it as it surfaced. I like that though. I also liked how it was unpredictable, and how you were consistent with going off on a tangent. It stopped me getting bored (not that I was). People try too hard sometimes, but this felt like you wasn't. I genuinely enjoyed this, for what it was.

[big baby]

this wasnt that good. Im not even being a dick on purpose but, I will point out the flaws and praise whats good. First, the comments about hip hop are funny. Second, it is uninspired nonsense. We get it, youre sad. Itd be cool if you were sad ad dope but yore just sad. Theres very little creativity here. Well to what I hold a certain standard. If to say, the likes of Objective wrote this, itd be showing signs of creativity and elevation. This seems stagnant. I know it may be an outlet. But, it just appears blatantly blank. We get it, youre a super genius or something, you think you are, its weak. I agree with the less pooular comments "show it dont say it". Get over it. What are you doing or have you done to make it a better place, the world? Besides numbing the pain with drugs? Seriously. Otherwise, its cool that youre writing. I like how youre now deemed different cause youre sad and im erratic. Good job

[Lars]

I watch the apathy wrap around my passion.


liked that line a whole lot

this had snippets of BB creeping in towards the end imho but the rest was solid, most just dont feel the paragraph steez i guess but for me its never been a problem, i quite like its catharsis

lmao at natural hating on everything and anything certain people drop

pathetic

[Natural]

Originally Posted by Bags

Hi hater.

How many dicks.would u suck to get as much notoriety as a dull boy piece?


Congrays on the rape.


Aside from that


This shit was ok..... i read it.....

I hated the whole jaime kennedy section....blegh

Prior an after were alright......i guess we will never quite measure up to you tho dull....

VINTA......

Ahhh....it just feels uninspired at this point.

Now what's really funny is the your coming out to defend him, when dull boy took it like man. I'm not saying he agreed with me, because I don't know that but he didn't bitch about it...though I thought he would.

I don't want dull boys level of noteriety....there is a downside to it.
Id be happy with just getting credit where credits due...
And I do under certain aliases so I'm not worried. My intention here wasn't to hate as you are calling it. I just gave my opinion. I'm sorry I didn't praise your idol @Bags

And for the record I have enjoyed some of his previous writing...
So that ain't to say he can't write at all....but my original posts stands.
Good day.

[Wise Wiggles]

I want that in my mouth

[Fig]

This made me smile

[CopyPat]

i will always read ur posts for the simple reason of just seeing what you'll rhyme next, cause usually its really dope haha. but don't say we're all fake. copypat is the realness. errybuddy knows it.
i liked most of this. i agree with some of the comments that it is getting a little old/weak but whatever, this particular one was obviously uninspired etc. but overall the majority of your work is still waaaaaay up there, so cheer up ol chap haha. check my no fat chicks for a chuckle

[Mitch]

Sounds like late Eyedea, I like it. Fuck the haters. Emotion is art... I liked the start and the ending.

[dull boy]

I think it's funny this sparked a debate on my popularity and current emotional state. Shit is cool lol

This was subpar, and @Coup, I agree.

[big baby]

im just concerned about you

[Certain]

Originally Posted by big baby

im just concerned about you

This.