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04-16-2013, 04:19 PM
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lol @zenland
votw: redglare botw: pent vs bent wow there are 3 ppl in this league that layer there ish more then 2levels deep besides me.. and what i mean by that is hidden easter eggs, so depending on what you pick up in the verse is depending on how you look at the outcome.. this verse has i think 5-6 layers.. he has two.. not one but two stories joining up with one moral outcome.. And the trick with him and these other two writers is to be able to write these layers in without you (the reader) needing to get them, to still understand the meaning of the verse/point they are making.. i know how hard this is to keep clarity my "dream sequence" verse that other week has something like 10+ layers and then i was like oh why didnt anyone get it.. cause i over cooked that chook.. he kept it around 6 and it was a beautiful piece of writing.. so VOTW hands down REDGLARE well down mate..
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04-16-2013, 04:21 PM
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What's so funny
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04-16-2013, 04:26 PM
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Imma buck the trend a bit
VOTW = Zygote. Very dope allegory. better than his last few weeks' offerings. BOTW = CDM vs TopicalDooD5, holy crap yall are sleeping on this
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04-16-2013, 04:30 PM
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@zenland we voted the same thing.. n im over tired :( if you posted a pic of witty and said it was you i'd be like.. i seen that guy from somewhere and it aint eddy norton..
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04-16-2013, 04:31 PM
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lol Did you know me and Witty are cousins CK? He won't admit it....but we all know the truth....
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04-16-2013, 05:10 PM
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lol witty cool i would like to be related to him as well.. will u guys adopt me..
im not just a friend for christmas.. ima friend for life
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04-16-2013, 05:12 PM
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You're adopted as my cousin which in turn makes you Witty's cousin. We're one big happy family!!
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04-16-2013, 05:14 PM
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04-16-2013, 05:14 PM
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VOTW - Bent (shit is insane)
BOTW - Topical & CDM
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