bits to follow

[ill nik-A]

Huh?

I said that was good

I reworded my take maybe that came across wrong I'm assuming?

[Witty]

Ahem.

[King Ra.]

Definitely need to make the concept more original & creative. I think Witty's lines was pretty solid.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Witty

Fucking whore, be walking the streets even when it rains and you're wet thru
That's why you're trash...u wait on curbs for strange men to come and get you
@ill nik-A @Bags

Lol. I like this yo.

Im hungiver ill be more inciteful tomorrow ....but i dug this

[Ghost1]

@kieth im done battling for now yea.

an yea i genereally think of a bunch if concepts an jot em down, then when its time to write i start to think of how i wanna word my punch, always the punch first, then once i have rhe punch worded crisply i think if a set up that will give explanation to my punch....its a set up, ur setting up ur punch...so many people just do random rhymes tho an neglect tying it into their punches ....the very last thing i worry about is rhymin tbh, rhyming is easy......theres a gagillion words an alot if them rhyme, i do try to multi twice in the set up an once in the punch tho so it reads easier an gives ur bar more impact, other people like nik even will have the set up after there punch rhyme woth the last bar, which i think is slick too

[Obey]

Originally Posted by Bags

@kieth im done battling for now yea.

an yea i genereally think of a bunch if concepts an jot em down, then when its time to write i start to think of how i wanna word my punch, always the punch first, then once i have rhe punch worded crisply i think if a set up that will give explanation to my punch....its a set up, ur setting up ur punch...so many people just do random rhymes tho an neglect tying it into their punches ....the very last thing i worry about is rhymin tbh, rhyming is easy......theres a gagillion words an alot if them rhyme, i do try to multi twice in the set up an once in the punch tho so it reads easier an gives ur bar more impact, other people like nik even will have the set up after there punch rhyme woth the last bar, which i think is slick too

This is solid truth

[Flow]

He recycles his lines nearly every single day
Hes trash, thats why he bags on all yo shit after its been thrown away