Week 5 chat and predictions

[YDK]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

I dont care for metaphor

Wat about similes? Cuz they don't like you
see wat I did there? Did ya catch it?

[zygote]

Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?

[YDK]

Originally Posted by breathless

Totally agree, I usually read the verses at least 3 times and end up picking up on new things, do the vote and then read the other people's and often realize I still missed some things.

Exactly man, I'm sure there have been a number of votes that may not have changed but atleast been fed better if everything was picked up on. Yes its the writers job to make it understandable but its the readers job to comprehend. Shakespeare didn't dumb shit down so ppl understood better which is why he wasn't as universally known then but is now thought of as one of the greats.

[YDK]

Originally Posted by ZYG

Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?

Completely agree, I hate it when dialogue has a shit ton of multies cuz nobody actually believes that is the actual conversation lol

[Certain]

The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.

[breathless]

I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

[Split]

Ya but if readers never pick Up on tour stuff,, change yvour shit to ogetest contestants vores

[YDK]

"If I'm in the closet then you are below me
Cuz you take the b-a-t outta basement homie"

[YDK]

Originally Posted by breathless

I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

I must be completely missing your rhyme scheme

[breathless]

Cause it isn't a scheme, its a way of life, didn't really mean for it to be taken in stride

[YDK]

Darn

[patrown]

Originally Posted by Certain

The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.

^

[YDK]

Originally Posted by Certain

The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.

Yes but not all readers are of the same cloth. There isn't a verse in the world every person that reads it will comprehend every word

[Certain]

Sure, but there are verses in which everyone literate enough to be in this league can understand the content relatively clearly.

[e11even]

i shudda quoted. damn.

[patrown]

i like beer.

[YDK]

I like boobs

[e11even]

Originally Posted by breathless

I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

Originally Posted by breathless

Cause it isn't a scheme, its a way of life, didn't really mean for it to be taken in stride

i see what you did there lol.

[Certain]

The syllables don't match up, though.

[YDK]

Neither do your sisters hips..anymore
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