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Old 10-24-2013, 11:27 AM   #201
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please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities
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Old 10-24-2013, 12:40 PM   #202
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Swaying is gay. When ppl didn't catch my meanings I almost lost patience, but really its the writer's job to decide how attainable the point and main idea will be. Imo. If you don't know how to get across to voters, maybe you're not doing it right. Get better at wwriting and the pieces will speak for themselves.
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Old 10-24-2013, 12:50 PM   #203
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Old 10-24-2013, 12:58 PM   #204
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please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities
This guy with yet another slight at me

Go sulk in the corner some more, maybe then you'll grow up



Getting butt hurt over a fucking topical league because people dont "comprehend" your talent level

A bit full of ourselves are we?

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Old 10-24-2013, 01:08 PM   #205
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Old 10-24-2013, 01:51 PM   #206
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Old 10-24-2013, 03:28 PM   #208
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Explain and pontificate Larsingtonious
There are still some people in this league who throw around the term 'rhyme scheme' and by it all they mean is multies. A scheme has structure to it, ABBA etc, there are many people in this league who don't adhere to a strict rhyme scheme yet it gets commented on as a 'rhymescheme' just because they carry a multi string on at the end of a sentence.

People are calling it something it isn't.

Worse still, in my opinion, are the writers and readers that still rate single-syllable or two-syllable rhymes in a league with some of the nets best writers at present in it. From a technical aspect, the mechanics are majorly important in what I look for in a verse, equal to originality. My own mother could write a story with only having to rhyme one syllable, or sometimes not at all, and I feel the superior technical writing ability in this format should hold equal respect with originality. Single syllable rhymers need to step their game up, it's horrible to see, especially in their votes when they miss half the technical aspects going on because them themselves aren't able to do it and don't realise the technical difficulty behind what they are reading.

Long story short, there is no fucking way Adonis outwrote me in any format. Ever. I had the more original take, far superior rhyme scheme, mechanics way beyond his skill set, writers voice, pacing, you name it.

I pissed off a lot of voters by telling them they sucked in the week before my matchup, and they returned the favour by voting against me when they got the chance.

I've done this 10+ years, I know when I won, and know when I lost a fair one. I was robbed on that shit. All the voters who know what they're looking at gave me the win. The low tiers didn't.

Case closed.
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Old 10-24-2013, 03:29 PM   #209
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I agree with almost all of that. Well said!
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Old 10-24-2013, 03:29 PM   #210
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This guy with yet another slight at me

Go sulk in the corner some more, maybe then you'll grow up



Getting butt hurt over a fucking topical league because people dont "comprehend" your talent level

A bit full of ourselves are we?

fagot ass cracker
I would hand you your ass in any topic on any forum at any time, pussy.

Keep posting all friendly with people up in the chat thread so you can vote for each other.

I do me.

I ain't here to make friends.
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Old 10-24-2013, 03:51 PM   #211
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I'm a cracker an I'll be damned if a drunk dude gonna start using racial slurs outta malice


Chill guy

Take it how you may but calling a white dude cracker ain't really racist to me.

And clutter sweatie cake, you're sad. Def beefed with half the league easily

Anyone can beat anyone @ anytime on any site

My thing is I beat you here. Mmmmmm
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Old 10-24-2013, 03:55 PM   #212
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complaining about voters after a loss is never a good look. your better than that Lars
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Old 10-24-2013, 04:09 PM   #214
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Swing away let the sway fall where it may
1, 2, 3 see scheme is free from the dismay
So hey...take it for what its worth.
Beating a dead hprse..is beating a dead horse.

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Everyone here gets pissed or at least upset when they're voted against. If you say you don't, you're a liar. I've made the mistake of calling out voters before and honestly felt like a dick right afterwards. If you lose, you lost. Period. You don't like the voting then don't compete.
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Everyone here gets pissed or at least upset when they're voted against. If you say you don't, you're a liar. I've made the mistake of calling out voters before and honestly felt like a dick right afterwards. If you lose, you lost. Period. You don't like the voting then don't compete.
I get mad every time I lose but at the same time if I know I lost because the other verse was better I don't mind

But I also realize that voting is based off preference and that flow and cadence will nearly never be the same as my writers voice. I've lost probably over 40 matches in my life, and I know there is zero point carrying resentment towards voters.

Although it took time to learn that, I was once an even bigger asshole and just bitched non stop until I ran my first league, and then it simply all changed
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Old 10-24-2013, 06:25 PM   #220
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Not true, Zenmaster. I honestly don't get upset at any votes against me nor even after a loss. If I do get upset, it's at myself for not writing my best when I could. But I hold no grudges against voters nor against opponents after I lose. I like the votes against me because I can take the criticism and use it to make my next drop better.

S'all about elevating, man. You the Zenmaster. You should know this!!!
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