Week 5 chat and predictions - Page 10

e11even · 10-24-2013, 04:00 AM

@Just Write when you dopping?

... I'm tryna synchronize...

YDK · 10-24-2013, 04:05 AM

@breathless stop comparing text to audio bro, I don't write to make songs out of then therefore they wont always flow like it. I wrote an entire book of poetry an I'd say 98% of it isn't written like I would speak it or "rap" it. This is a competitive writing league on a rap site not a written rap contest ya feel me? There is a difference in everyone's style, the best overall verse usually wins. Story verses aren't need at all but they're more relatable to the readers normally so if a good story is against a good metaphor it just depends on originality and execution not on which a more thoroughly described story with character development imagery or anything else, its just personal preference and honestly metaphorical verses or symbolic verses are generally harder to execute by nature, its just a part of writing bro, but trust me stick with it and you'll grow as a writer

Zen · 10-24-2013, 07:39 AM

All I'm saying is I write topicals and my shit would still sound good on a beat.

Zen · 10-24-2013, 08:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenland

All I'm saying is I write topicals and my shit would still sound good on a beat.

Foh real. Zenmaster Fresh dawg.

breathless · 10-24-2013, 08:39 AM

Oh alcohol, how I didn't miss thee, sadly though, I agree with everything I shouldn't have said, to me, first and foremost, this is a rap league, just being text doesnt change that, otherwise this league should be in a poetry section

PancakeBrah · 10-24-2013, 08:55 AM

My flow was better. Rhymes were better. My story didn't have a twist. You're a butthurt faggot with a simple style trying to make yourself out to be Bob Dylan. Fuck your swaying, loser.

YDK · 10-24-2013, 10:00 AM

Are you allowed to not believe in chickpeas lol

Certain · 10-24-2013, 10:45 AM

Chickpeas are delicious.

@Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

YDK · 10-24-2013, 11:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Chickpeas are delicious.

@Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

Yes they are, it takes a horrible person. To not believe in chickpeas

Mr. J · 10-24-2013, 12:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Chickpeas are delicious.

@Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

I might too...if not I'll need an ext due to fatherly tendencies @Certain

PancakeBrah · 10-24-2013, 10:49 AM

Can I write a whole essay swaying @Certain? Seems like the reasonable and mature thing to do and allowable in this league.

Mike Wrecka · 10-24-2013, 10:54 AM

ok what did i miss? investigating sway accusation now

PancakeBrah · 10-24-2013, 11:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka

ok what did i miss? investigating sway accusation now

Certain deleted it. Split has it quoted in a post.

Im not calling for a DQ because I want voter feedback but it rustled my jimmies.

YDK · 10-24-2013, 11:06 AM

Fuck a sway post, I read both verses an tbh pancake got it either way I just haven't had tome to explain a vote yet

Mike Wrecka · 10-24-2013, 11:09 AM

Hummus is my jam for like the last month. just started eating it and im addicted

Certain · 10-24-2013, 11:11 AM

I deleted the more egregious of the two sway posts. The second one seemed more like a philosophical debate.

Mike Wrecka · 10-24-2013, 11:13 AM

ok i saw it. i can see deleted posts as well. the battle will stay open as per Pancakebrahs request.

Certain · 10-24-2013, 11:14 AM

I'm going to write next week's Certain's Corner about flow and rhyme scheme.

Clutter Buck · 10-24-2013, 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

I'm going to write next week's Certain's Corner about flow and rhyme scheme.

please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities

PancakeBrah · 10-24-2013, 11:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutter Buck

please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities

Explain and pontificate Larsingtonious

10-24-2013, 04:00 AM	#1
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	@Just Write when you dopping? ... I'm tryna synchronize... __________________ Ahem.

10-24-2013, 04:05 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	@breathless stop comparing text to audio bro, I don't write to make songs out of then therefore they wont always flow like it. I wrote an entire book of poetry an I'd say 98% of it isn't written like I would speak it or "rap" it. This is a competitive writing league on a rap site not a written rap contest ya feel me? There is a difference in everyone's style, the best overall verse usually wins. Story verses aren't need at all but they're more relatable to the readers normally so if a good story is against a good metaphor it just depends on originality and execution not on which a more thoroughly described story with character development imagery or anything else, its just personal preference and honestly metaphorical verses or symbolic verses are generally harder to execute by nature, its just a part of writing bro, but trust me stick with it and you'll grow as a writer __________________

10-24-2013, 08:39 AM	#5
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	Oh alcohol, how I didn't miss thee, sadly though, I agree with everything I shouldn't have said, to me, first and foremost, this is a rap league, just being text doesnt change that, otherwise this league should be in a poetry section __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets

10-24-2013, 10:00 AM	#7
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Are you allowed to not believe in chickpeas lol __________________

10-24-2013, 10:45 AM	#8
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Chickpeas are delicious. @Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-24-2013, 07:39 AM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	All I'm saying is I write topicals and my shit would still sound good on a beat.

10-24-2013, 08:55 AM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	My flow was better. Rhymes were better. My story didn't have a twist. You're a butthurt faggot with a simple style trying to make yourself out to be Bob Dylan. Fuck your swaying, loser.

10-24-2013, 10:49 AM	#11
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Can I write a whole essay swaying @Certain? Seems like the reasonable and mature thing to do and allowable in this league.

10-24-2013, 10:54 AM	#12
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	ok what did i miss? investigating sway accusation now __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-24-2013, 11:06 AM	#14
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Fuck a sway post, I read both verses an tbh pancake got it either way I just haven't had tome to explain a vote yet __________________

10-24-2013, 11:09 AM	#15
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Hummus is my jam for like the last month. just started eating it and im addicted __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-24-2013, 11:11 AM	#16
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I deleted the more egregious of the two sway posts. The second one seemed more like a philosophical debate. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-24-2013, 11:13 AM	#17
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	ok i saw it. i can see deleted posts as well. the battle will stay open as per Pancakebrahs request. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-24-2013, 11:14 AM	#18
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I'm going to write next week's Certain's Corner about flow and rhyme scheme. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

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