Flo Real Vs. Serious [S&F] - STORYTELLER WINS 4-2

[Beyond]

Y'all be hoping flo don't show, cus when i blow, It's an explosion making more waves then the ocean,
Cus when i flex an get the flow in motion, i turn heads with how my threads are woven
Horrible opener. Were there even any multies? I mean, there were 2-syllable 'multies,' but a lot don't even count those as true multies. I guess technically they are, still not very impressive. You also had terrible linking. Repeated 'cus' at the beginning of the second line to link it with the first when you already used it after the very first rhyme. A lot of one word rhyming going on. C'mon, son.
Fuck emotions, I'm makin more noise then a deployed Boeing hooked up an amplified on distort brah
You better realise that reals eyes are piercing the elements, I'm talking fire earth wind and water
'hooked up an amplified on distort brah'? The fuck that even mean? What is an 'amplified on distort? The fuck? Did you just use some old ass wordplay that was said in a rap song mad years ago? LMFAO. WTF does water even rhyme with? You changed it up in the next bar... distort brah? Wow.
So fly, i look down on bitches cus I'm always high leave em surprised by my electrifying swagger
I bring more heat then a solar ray magnified by a magnifying glass thats da size of Madagascar
Fly/high? Really now? Impressive, ROFLZ. You need to rhyme with the endings more. Way too long of lines to not rhyme at all with the endings.
Not on my par your slacking, You force flows like anakin couldn't mind trick a blow from a bitch
I'm such a cocky fuck I got hawkin shakin fists, da dalai lama miffed an Mike j fox standin still n stiff
Not on your par, eh? LOL. Force flows l ike Anakin couldn't mind trick... the fuck? Run on sentence? What you doing, boy? You got hawkin shakin fists? HAHA.
You know noskill, shit I'm so quick I could steal steam from ya kettle an the pitch from your screams
Your sofa, chairs, table an stairs apples an pears, thoughts from your dreams an seams fromYour jeans
Who the fuck is noskill? Seriously, who is that? LMAO. This actually wasn't AS bad a bar as your others, at least in the oh shit factor category. Multi-syllabic rhyming seems to be your Kobe Bryant, though.

vs

Flow with ease with text its cheese so light camera action,
Metal drawn practice put the chrome to your adlibs to say your auto-tune bashed in.
At least steady 2-syllable rhyming...
Fuckin' bastard duking with me leaves gods in shake... Hiding in fear,
Basking in clear sight from this sheer might that'll drop mountains chugging beers.
Or not.
Soul kahn peer i can tell your vexed with the deepest thought of gay pirate sex mission,
Suck the dick then get ya eye sticked and kicked in the shin to start hoppin and limpin'.
Ok.
I've been rippin' leave you out on the deepend,
Compasition mix of bach and moz with a Hitler direction composing that deadly silent treatment.
Yay, another 2-syllable rhyme!
Hold no secrets Im a deranged heathen.. Something you cant match with,
Go to the seamstress to have ur apparel and skin weaved in cuz the requested a clothes casket.
Probably your best bar.


Overall, not a very great S&F battle. Both need to vastly up their multi-syllable rhyming game for starters. Let's not even delve into the swag portion of it or intricate rhyme schemes aspect. Those will come with time. So will perfecting the multi-syllabics to be more natural and fluent. End of the day, Felt like Flo Real dropped more content (had more stretched lines) which lead to Storyteller being more consistent and his flow being better. His end rhymes were closer together and Flo Real didn't rhyme with his end rhymes in the middle or beginning of a lot of his line, which made the flow even worse since the lines were already much longer than Storyteller's. Both need to also work on their clarity and wording. Too many run on sentences and bad linking. Basically just work on everything. Props to both.

/v storyteller