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Old 06-29-2013, 12:10 PM   #1
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Rawn: Dope verse, enjoyed it from start to finnish. The flow was onpoint for the most time and the verse as a whole was solid imo. Couldn't find any obvious flaws as I thought the lines and concepts was cool enough for a s&f.

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Al Po: First off, fuck yeah! I love this beat! Ages ago since I listened to it now, hah, but it's raw af. THANKS for that!

I managed to catch the flow until ''check ya tone bitch'', after that it was rather sketchy as fuck and I wasn't able to follow it, or at least how you visioned it in your head to this beat. That being said; The swaggin' is on point and I enjoyed the creativity in the concepts a lot.

Vote: This could go either way tbh, but since the flow is just as important as the content I feel Al Po's verse is lacking a lot in that regards. I enjoyed the creativity to Al Po but Rawns verse was also dope in that regards but not as great as Al Po. If Al Po had kept it up with the flow/rhymescheme he would have snatched my vote.

but as it stands now; Rawn MacDon gets my vote. Dope battle.
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