communication (the poet)

Advocate · 06-27-2013, 12:30 AM

This was really strong! Like Coup said I really feel as though the vocab you used really brought out the strength of the content you had wrote. You were very descriptive and that also brought it out to life. You had a good use of metaphors and ya flow was pretty dope. I like the part when you said,

"Motivating its holding; its gritty gripping and groping,
or possibly just a ploy to invoke the feelings I'm posing.
I dare to go,
lower than the lowest of baritones
then rhythm rip recipients just to see, can they bear the tone?"

This was a good drop, I liked it.

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06-27-2013, 12:30 AM	#7
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	This was really strong! Like Coup said I really feel as though the vocab you used really brought out the strength of the content you had wrote. You were very descriptive and that also brought it out to life. You had a good use of metaphors and ya flow was pretty dope. I like the part when you said, "Motivating its holding; its gritty gripping and groping, or possibly just a ploy to invoke the feelings I'm posing. I dare to go, lower than the lowest of baritones then rhythm rip recipients just to see, can they bear the tone?" This was a good drop, I liked it.