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sral · 07-25-2024, 01:31 PM

Mike is on RN

Objective · 07-25-2024, 02:43 PM

Mike said he was gonna pass on that @sral

Also, @Scar, there was no underlying message to the story I wrote this time around. I wrote that story for the sake of it just being a story altho I did start 1-2 with concepts of that nature in mind. The vast majority of my topicals got an underlying message, symbolism, metaphors and/or personifying aspects of mental health but figured while writing that not all stories needs it.

Sometimes it can be nice with just a story and just that. However, in order for it to hit well it needs to be done well enough/to perfection which my piece needed quite a bit of polishing to achieve to say the least. At least vs the level of writer I was up against

Scar · 07-25-2024, 05:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Objective

Mike said he was gonna pass on that @sral

Also, @Scar, there was no underlying message to the story I wrote this time around. I wrote that story for the sake of it just being a story altho I did start 1-2 with concepts of that nature in mind. The vast majority of my topicals got an underlying message, symbolism, metaphors and/or personifying aspects of mental health but figured while writing that not all stories needs it.

Sometimes it can be nice with just a story and just that. However, in order for it to hit well it needs to be done well enough/to perfection which my piece needed quite a bit of polishing to achieve to say the least. At least vs the level of writer I was up against

thats great and i always appreciate underlying message metaphors and stuff like that but i just didn't think it was communicated that well in this particular piece. I can pick on nuances, i can assure u.

Objective · 07-25-2024, 06:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Scar

thats great and i always appreciate underlying message metaphors and stuff like that but i just didn't think it was communicated that well in this particular piece. I can pick on nuances, i can assure u.

Ye, defo nothing like that in that particular verse. Just a good ol' bedtime story

07-25-2024, 01:31 PM	#1
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07-25-2024, 02:43 PM	#2
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Mike said he was gonna pass on that @sral Also, @Scar, there was no underlying message to the story I wrote this time around. I wrote that story for the sake of it just being a story altho I did start 1-2 with concepts of that nature in mind. The vast majority of my topicals got an underlying message, symbolism, metaphors and/or personifying aspects of mental health but figured while writing that not all stories needs it. Sometimes it can be nice with just a story and just that. However, in order for it to hit well it needs to be done well enough/to perfection which my piece needed quite a bit of polishing to achieve to say the least. At least vs the level of writer I was up against __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

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