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Hey man I like the vibe here, and I understand you’re freestyling but I’m not really a fan of this type of hip hop unless it’s done originally or uniquely. You’ve proven yourself as a fantastic writer in the open mic section so if you take time, write a dope track and use this style to deliver it it’s going to be flames. You’ve got a decent voice and know your way around the instrumental good stuff
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yea bro take time on your freestyle so that it is polished and not a freestyle but when you do do that make sure you deliver it like you did this freestyle
then it will be good i think?! |
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I'm the girl on it. The boy isn't on the site.
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We made the song one take thought I'd share cause I'd love to make something with anyone.
Last edited by Etherwave; 08-24-2020 at 10:33 PM. Reason: Typo |
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this will end well.
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Oh well in that case you’ve got a good voice
Do you use band lab primarily to record? I’d be down to collab I just don’t have any recording equipment anymore |
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I wish your vocals were mixed louder and more clearly, because you have a good voice. You could have had more of a lead on this, IMO. For what it’s worth, I’m not a fan of the kind of rapping that the MC was doing (and it was clearly not a freestyle)... but, when you guys both moved into more R n B mode, it was enjoyable. He’s a better singer than an MC, for whatever that’s worth. You should definitely keep making music.. You have some chops for it. Cheers.
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Ok, I see you Etherwave. Musically inclined brotha!
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There is a ridiculous amount of potential with your voice, I would love to have you on a hook
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There isn't enough femcees on here
Girl that was so tight The flow amazing Creative voice |
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Thank you!
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