ARTEMIS ROADKILL

[PancakeBrah]

Not that well acquainted with Greek mythology, so some of the allusions and their implicit meaning were lost on me. From what I could gather this was quite enjoyable.

neutralism, view the prism, stop. find your description

^Enjoyed that line quite a bit. You can't play Hamlet. The fact that the neutralism/view the prism multi not only works as rhyme but a concept is neat. But those types of things are a penchant for you, it seems.

objectivity and symbolism. divided conditions
numbers represent a thirst for quantifiable wisdom

^Cool.

theres no blanket or breast that can replicate the safety of death

^That, too.

I didn't like the ACT/SAT allusions and wordplay. Other than that this was straight fiyah holmes. Favorite scheme was either the euphemism track or Apolloan myths. Readers more familiar with the myths might enjoy this even more than I did, but even in the portions where the message was a bit muddy for me I still enjoyed the form. Good stUff, fer sure.