Us.

[Witty]

This was one of the best verses ever posted here. I know it's self praise but I would say exactly the same regardless who wrote it.

I am not often happy with my previous work, I usually cringe. Imo this is a masterpiece and I don't believe many people here could have done this.

Unfortunately the shit I'm currently writing could be bettered by a toddler headbutting a keyboard.

[Objective]

Originally Posted by Witty

Imo this is a masterpiece and I don't believe many people here could have done this.

Your self praise is warranted here. Coming from the land where law of Jante is king I still find you to be proud of this work in order.

"Castigate compassion" was great, the switch up in flow surprisingly sudden but not unwanted. Closure simple and poignant while maintaining a complex flow without seeming cluttered or excessive. Content and the heart of this piece as a whole is dope af, too

10/10, will read again. Left inspired