ALLOW ME TO BE FRANK

[Dominate]

TIME FOR A COMMA TO EMPHASISE, EVERY RHYME,

OFF ON A TANGENT BETWEEN COMMAS AT RANDOM WITH NO LOGICAL ANSWER AS TO THE SPOTS THAT THEY LAND IN

AN OVER ELABORATE SCHEME WITH NO TANGIBLE MEANING OR PASSIBLE THEME

SWEET NOTHINGS WITH CADENCE

THE FINAL BOSS IN WRITING TOPICS WITH MINDLESS NONSENSE


Very enjoyable read. The parody wasn't perfect - he carries a scheme for a lot longer and typically with shorter sentence fragments rather than run-on sentences without punctuation. Although you alluded to that with the comments about his use of commas. You needed to randomly choose a different font for the whole piece and have some sections right-aligned and some key words/phrases in different font sizes too. But this worked well as a diss. Very amusing. LOL @ "sweet nothings with cadence".