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Old 09-03-2022, 07:21 PM   #1
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With Mike's prologue, I was expecting a lot more. This is far from mikes dopest verse, he dabbled into the subject of ADHD which I am quite familiar with . The part that stood out the most to me was, "somethings lurking in the shadows the way moss in a forest gathers"...that was my hook. I feel like he could of done more...but is verse was lacking in a sense. Dom on the other hand made it look easy, but definite use the great Poe as inspiration...which I have aspired to reach Poe's level...but in his verse you feel the madness increasing as well as the confusion...the overall essence has a darkness to it it the defines the subject accurately. Good job on both ends, But I'm giving to Dom.
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