My Hometown

Advocate · 06-24-2013, 01:20 PM

This was a really good drop! I liked how you were able to express your pain while showing how much you still try to seek joy despite the heartbreak. I'm guessin you might of had it kind of rough growin up? I grew up alot of my life in Harlem. And so many of the things you listed I can either relate to or know someone that can relate to. But as I was sayin, you displayed good imagery throughout your post and it was in my opinion very enjoyable to read. You had plenty of good metaphors and I thought it had plenty of structure as well. Keep up the writing, and I'm sure you may end up hearing from me again at some point. Good drop!

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06-24-2013, 01:20 PM	#2
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	This was a really good drop! I liked how you were able to express your pain while showing how much you still try to seek joy despite the heartbreak. I'm guessin you might of had it kind of rough growin up? I grew up alot of my life in Harlem. And so many of the things you listed I can either relate to or know someone that can relate to. But as I was sayin, you displayed good imagery throughout your post and it was in my opinion very enjoyable to read. You had plenty of good metaphors and I thought it had plenty of structure as well. Keep up the writing, and I'm sure you may end up hearing from me again at some point. Good drop!