08-02-2022, 09:40 PM | #1 |
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Week 6 Due Friday, August 5th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
08-02-2022, 10:18 PM | #2 |
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Yo 10
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08-03-2022, 04:08 AM | #3 |
Bullying Yall Bitches.
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10 is fine.
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08-05-2022, 02:00 PM | #4 |
Bullying Yall Bitches.
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I need the small ext I’ll post soon as I get off work.
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08-05-2022, 09:48 PM | #5 |
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Sent 10 to Sharp VIA PM.
@R!canTheoryz Last edited by Sharp; 08-05-2022 at 10:42 PM. Reason: @ing r!can |
08-06-2022, 03:37 PM | #6 |
Bullying Yall Bitches.
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I’ll split ya Ear ever met a scared retired graffiti artist? You’ll Quit in Fear,
This like Magic Markers the way one swipe’ll make INK disappear. I’ve been flexible. To build a crazy bond wit ya ppls never inseparable, I’ll kill Your credits bold out Anythin you’ve said & still wouldn’t come out incREDIBLE. Better run south. Having a hoe for a wife ain’t reslly some clout, Because Your girls pussy been sitting on miles & that’s why we call her Fun Couch. Imma bout to do Herb Badly. Right after I expose This Nerds Hobby, You can sing all the ja Rule you want Ink will still get murder faster than IRV gotti. This stupid bitch never raised it always been apart a group of lies, So don’t stick ya hand on a touchy subject unless it’s a ceiling fan while the power on high. Last edited by R!canTheoryz; 08-06-2022 at 04:32 PM. Reason: End rhyme lol |
08-06-2022, 04:10 PM | #7 |
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Sharp noticed I had to do some digging on my last opponent, but your a known loser
Vote-Rican?? He thinks it's a joke he's in on, not laughing with you...were laughing at you, stupid! Said he'll post after work, guess the live battle scene ain't poppin Stop n check with us?? Stfu, that's just the store you go to cash your weekly profit. dgaf about your live battles, that we've never seen video of You see the gif? That's just your gang of lames tryna get into the club NC for sure the only time you'll catch rican with a Poll and it gets clicked proper Strap is stitched to my shoulder so when I 'Terminate', naturally I'm 'gettin the choppa' I hope your moms caught a toliet roll from the Donalds hands, B I'm lying...honestly hope that storm a few years ago wiped out your whole fucking family!!! |
08-07-2022, 11:37 AM | #8 |
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Thought Rican had better ideas and smoother writing but a couple like Murda Inc bar could’ve been done better. Incredible I think your closer was strongest but a few at the start barely even rhymed to me
Vote - Rican
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08-07-2022, 11:52 AM | #9 |
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Rican delivered a harder hitting verse. Nothing was knockout but the wording / multis helped it land. Opener was LOTB despite the simple wordplay. Inc, ideas were there but needed more time taken to polish
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08-07-2022, 08:49 PM | #10 |
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V/RICAN..
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08-07-2022, 11:09 PM | #11 |
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Rican threw around some decent concepts although nothing was exactly hair raising, I think the attacks were definitely one dimensional focusing on just his name and nothing more. Would like to see some variety.
Inc was a little more variable with concepts but the execution wasn’t there. I think Inc needs to put more thought into making his concepts sting. I gave the same sort of advice earlier to Defiant, you’ve got to actually say something that’s going to do damage sometimes being clever isn’t enough. Go for the throat V/Rican both could have used some rewriting but he was better this week |
08-08-2022, 10:12 PM | #12 |
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This was… interesting.
The ink lines from Rican are maybe the best things in his verse, and the stop n check line is probably my favorite from Inc. This was close. Going with Rican on the strength of 2-to-1. V - Rican
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08-08-2022, 10:15 PM | #13 |
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Rican
Opener an okay ink/Inc obvious name flip Second nah Fun couch... huh? Is this a funk ouch wordplay? An ink ja rule punch in 2022... Jesus Christ Closer makes no sense... touchy subject and a fan ref? Vs. Opener is poorly worded but the punch is ight I assume Stop n Check is a mkneymart kind of store... okay third no The random Arnold movies with no mention of Arnold is interesting Storm probably an old personal... worded bland and straightforward Seen both drop better before... i have Inc edging it with the stop n Check line and a couple okay personal attempts vs easy and played nameplays
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