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07-29-2022, 11:35 PM
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low tide in serotonin bay
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Honestly , I don’t think this verse holds up if Seth shows and is clicking on all cylinders. It’s super one dimensional with only a single attack point which is seths son
But you didn’t have to worry about that, and honestly there was some funny shit here (first 6 were pretty good) after that kinda fell quality wise and the joke started to get old. Keep writing bro |
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