WEEK TWELVE: ADVERSE (4-3) vs MASTER ROCK (5-5) ADVERSE WINS 3-0

NYCSPITZ · 07-10-2022, 10:33 AM

Ok lil battle here

I liked adverse’s approach of her being a serial killer victim, I mean clearly it’s a human in a sheet so I thought it could have been flipped less abstractly but beggars can’t be choosers. You some negative ass muh fucka. Anywho, this shit was cool, nothing mind blowing but well put together and had a coherent topic. Few nice imagery lines to it

Master rock felt like he just keystyled some shit up. It’s better than what most humans can do, but not enough in a topical league filled with grizzled longtime text warriors. Had some nice lines but it just didn’t get fleshed out, lol @ you did it all negative like adverse whatever tho. Hope to see you drop a bomb soon.

MVGT adverse

07-10-2022, 10:33 AM	#8
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Ok lil battle here I liked adverse’s approach of her being a serial killer victim, I mean clearly it’s a human in a sheet so I thought it could have been flipped less abstractly but beggars can’t be choosers. You some negative ass muh fucka. Anywho, this shit was cool, nothing mind blowing but well put together and had a coherent topic. Few nice imagery lines to it Master rock felt like he just keystyled some shit up. It’s better than what most humans can do, but not enough in a topical league filled with grizzled longtime text warriors. Had some nice lines but it just didn’t get fleshed out, lol @ you did it all negative like adverse whatever tho. Hope to see you drop a bomb soon. MVGT adverse __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

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