PROJECT X WEEK THREE

[Dominate]

Holy shit man. This was epic.

You're writing a whole fucking saga of Marvel/DC fanfic screenplays. Amazing.

I struggled enough to come up with an angle on a couple of these pics INDIVIDUALLY, I really don't think I could have found anything interesting to write about that tied them all together but damn if you didn't do it. A mutant whose power is to paint scenes into reality. Such a good idea.

The pacing/build up was perfect. The little drip drip drip of clues and foreshadowing in the first half of the piece was so well done. You incorporated some of the pics via metaphor even before the 'reveal' which was dope too.

Seriously impressed with the rhyming - basically every line here was DENSE with multis and you held on to a lot of the schemes for ages, but it was just like you were writing something that happened to rhyme a lot - the multis were so natural and fluid. You made it look easy. Cold hard victim of cotard's syndrome whewwww.

There's too much to quote, really.

This was a superb show of skill. Something to aspire to. Thanks for doing this.