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Old 04-04-2022, 01:50 AM   #1
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3-2 Corleone in the lead
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Old 04-04-2022, 04:26 PM   #2
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Candy:

(The following is an inner monologue and should be ignored for my real opinion at the end of the vote - I have no idea how this manifested itself onto the screen and cannot delete it)

I mean, did you think the razor blade in the heart lollipop were teeth? And then, what? You saw the red of the heart and thought of blood and decided to make a vampire piece? Is that how your mind works? Because I don't get it... Like at all.

Also, I still don't understand you in almost any way. Your biggest battle every week is with the english language and you usually lose. Your voting is horrendous and almost downright fraudulent. These people calling you "cryptic" probably haven't read a Candy verse before and have no idea that you're perpetually unintelligible ."Graves tone" was most likely not even intended as wordplay... You probably were literally talking about a graves tone... Anything that ever connects with anyone on any level is a fluke.


(End of inner monologue)

Not really feeling this, Candy... but great effort!


Corleone:

Well I can understand you so you're already ahead of the game. Didn't really see any connection to the topic though... this just reeks with generalities. But I like your effortless style and flow and the old school '//' at the end of your bars tug at my heartstrings.

That said, this verse gets slaughtered by any real competition but fortunately for you, you were up against Candy, who pretty much can only beat Sinacog.

So...

Vote: Corleone
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