[Wild Card] JaysonFresh & evaD vs Quill & Adverse [Fresh/evaD advance]

bare ryu · 01-10-2022, 04:10 AM

jayson/evad

yall wack af. one of u too corny, the other's punches come up short
couldnt connect to a live person if ya fist yelled 'representative' over customer support
not bad, good angle but could have worked on the wording a bit.
plus fresh the type to shoot ya while sleepin at point blank
you lie motionless as i uncover the sheets like a magician's tablecloth yank
i actually really liked this bar. smooth wording
And your clever friend is a feathered pen, your tourney path is ending quick
Ironic how whenever Quill’s writing I just scratch my head n dip
i feel like this angle is a bit played but its not a bad approach. a little weak though
This pair of losers collaborating in the lab is no threat
If I found you two holed up in the studio then Jayson’s already stabbed you to death
kind of a miss for me. not terrible but maybe wasnt that impacted by the wording

quill / adverse
Evad acts gangster til I drive thru then he's certainly friendly
The only way Dave'll square up when it comes to beef is burgers at wendys
pretty funny angle. always wondered why their shit is like that. a little light for me though
You faggots think ya'll sick...but this test'll have ya halt..
Cuz this stick to your face? Gon' lead to a negative result
heater. love it
If I let the bucs fly? You should jet before they start mowin ya down
Yeah once the GOAT targets ya, you leaving topless like Antonio Brown
this one is tough as well
I throw the kind of combos that end up rocking ya life fools
Y'all are just a combination we'll never remember...lockers in high school
ehhh this one didnt hit as much for me. alright closer i guess

my vote goes to quill /adverse for this one. close battle though. a lot of jaysonfresh's bars were good but i think quill was a bit more consistent. good stuff

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01-10-2022, 04:10 AM	#9
bare ryu 777 Join Date: Aug 2019 Posts: 57 Rep Power: 0	jayson/evad yall wack af. one of u too corny, the other's punches come up short couldnt connect to a live person if ya fist yelled 'representative' over customer support not bad, good angle but could have worked on the wording a bit. plus fresh the type to shoot ya while sleepin at point blank you lie motionless as i uncover the sheets like a magician's tablecloth yank i actually really liked this bar. smooth wording And your clever friend is a feathered pen, your tourney path is ending quick Ironic how whenever Quill’s writing I just scratch my head n dip i feel like this angle is a bit played but its not a bad approach. a little weak though This pair of losers collaborating in the lab is no threat If I found you two holed up in the studio then Jayson’s already stabbed you to death kind of a miss for me. not terrible but maybe wasnt that impacted by the wording quill / adverse Evad acts gangster til I drive thru then he's certainly friendly The only way Dave'll square up when it comes to beef is burgers at wendys pretty funny angle. always wondered why their shit is like that. a little light for me though You faggots think ya'll sick...but this test'll have ya halt.. Cuz this stick to your face? Gon' lead to a negative result heater. love it If I let the bucs fly? You should jet before they start mowin ya down Yeah once the GOAT targets ya, you leaving topless like Antonio Brown this one is tough as well I throw the kind of combos that end up rocking ya life fools Y'all are just a combination we'll never remember...lockers in high school ehhh this one didnt hit as much for me. alright closer i guess my vote goes to quill /adverse for this one. close battle though. a lot of jaysonfresh's bars were good but i think quill was a bit more consistent. good stuff