[Round 1] 5. Resin/Saint vs 8. cum boyz [cum boyz advance]

[Answer]

bare ryu/Answer

asian house party…til shots from the 12 gauge start disturbing the function
you’ll see more kicks at the front door than people observing our customs
dweeb ass meathead…i could tell the gear aint been kind to res
pull up on him like his avi - grippin iron im inclined to press
whole crew loaded w/ techs & shotties
red rover.. u bump into my team, everyone of em got they arms out ready to catch a body
droppin gems.. inf act eye of the tiger, one uppercut lends em a facelift
Aladdin treasure - soon as this monkey puts hands on me, this cat's whole head'll get caved in

[sral]

asian house party…til shots from the 12 gauge start disturbing the function
you’ll see more kicks at the front door than people observing our customs

I liked it, felt it could have hit harder maybe or been worded more harshly but not bad, just a light jab thrown.

dweeb ass meathead…i could tell the gear aint been kind to res
pull up on him like his avi - grippin iron im inclined to press

I preferred the wording on this one, more aggressive and attacking the opposition. I’m not overly a fan of lines about people’s avatars to be quite honest, and it’s not like these two are unknowns with nothing to use against them so there should be a trove of stuff that could have been used other than the angle. This wasn’t bad; I just felt more could have been done and better utilised.

whole crew loaded w/ techs & shotties
red rover.. u bump into my team, everyone of em got they arms out ready to catch a body

We’ve seen a few of these done similarly, off top I recall a trust exercise flip on a similar idea so I can’t give us as many props as I may have but I do appreciate the red rover twist on the older catching body idea. It’s executed well too.

droppin gems.. inf act eye of the tiger, one uppercut lends em a facelift
Aladdin treasure - soon as this monkey puts hands on me, this cat's whole head'll get caved in

This is good, nice concept to it, maybe a little wordy to have to get the full thing out but I fucked with it. Left field kind of attack and unexpected.