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Join Date: Jan 2016
Posts: 1,484
Battle Record: 6-15
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Universe:
"Long-term plan is Orc you geek, warm up week; You just a whore to me How I know you're not a man? Body cam, I have it on good authority" Decent "No hall of names for Swerve; I tried to find text that's saved and failed Kinda sketch he has a way with words yet left no paper trail..." Cool here Overall: Pennywise was ok too didn't really tie together the best. Some other stuff was a little played like the wood and floored/hardware store. Caps crew was okish. Flow of the verse as a whole was good just not that many punches that landed imo. Vs. Swerve: "Swerve come through your block spraying, bullets hit the air with a thud, So when you see my barrel go over the falls....they'll run red with your blood." Cool here "But that's not true, you dont got one - cause you think boys is the sweetest, Dudes putting more life inside the Universe than a UFO conspiracy theorist." Dope "Decapitate with each swing, Swerve have you leaving in parts, Lay this hook on a 'Verse so nasty...it'll get to number on on the charts." I mean you can only cut his head off once. The punch/wordplay made up for it though. Overall: Couple hiccups but overall a solid effort here. Solid punches nice wordplay that flowed with bar and didn't make it confusing. Swerve had the better verse. Vote = Swerve |
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