puke

Alice · 06-30-2021, 12:44 PM

Read through this a few times now, the rhythmic pattern’s that enjoyable.
Loved these the most:

pinch to double-check i'm still human here,
show me a pauper about whom the affluent care.

- who can hurt you more than yourself?
God gave me wings but instead i flew to dirt

But really, everything read natural and came off as organic with clever turns of phrases. Sort of weaving in and out of interesting train of thoughts. Write more?

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06-30-2021, 12:44 PM	#1
Alice Member Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 53 Rep Power: 53114	Read through this a few times now, the rhythmic pattern’s that enjoyable. Loved these the most: pinch to double-check i'm still human here, show me a pauper about whom the affluent care. - who can hurt you more than yourself? God gave me wings but instead i flew to dirt But really, everything read natural and came off as organic with clever turns of phrases. Sort of weaving in and out of interesting train of thoughts. Write more?