First Song... Roasts, Opinions, Feedback?

The Dead Poet · 04-12-2021, 12:38 PM

Beats cool. Your raps sound like you didn't write it to the beat. It comes off like a text, which is why I hate text rappers over beats normally lol. Your voice wasn't that bad. Delivery was cool. It just really comes off like someone reciting a text over a beat. Work on that shit. peace.

Lenox · 04-12-2021, 01:43 PM

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Originally Posted by The Dead Poet

Beats cool. Your raps sound like you didn't write it to the beat. It comes off like a text, which is why I hate text rappers over beats normally lol. Your voice wasn't that bad. Delivery was cool. It just really comes off like someone reciting a text over a beat. Work on that shit. peace.

thanks bro

04-12-2021, 12:38 PM	#1
The Dead Poet Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 1,138 Rep Power: 22468539	Beats cool. Your raps sound like you didn't write it to the beat. It comes off like a text, which is why I hate text rappers over beats normally lol. Your voice wasn't that bad. Delivery was cool. It just really comes off like someone reciting a text over a beat. Work on that shit. peace. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/rafael-jesus-martinez

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