First Song... Roasts, Opinions, Feedback?

Ajax · 04-12-2021, 08:57 AM

The commentary at the end came off pretty corny and unnecessary. You don’t need to tell a random listener to suck your dick for no reason.

The track itself was ok. Not bad, by any means. I think it could use some re-takes, because in a couple spots the flow slipped, but the flow in general was solid enough.. What was really missing was delivery — you didn’t sound amped enough. But, that will come with practice, and some of that is definitely a mixing issue... all in all, this was pretty cool. Definitely a good foundation.

04-12-2021, 08:57 AM	#17
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	The commentary at the end came off pretty corny and unnecessary. You don’t need to tell a random listener to suck your dick for no reason. The track itself was ok. Not bad, by any means. I think it could use some re-takes, because in a couple spots the flow slipped, but the flow in general was solid enough.. What was really missing was delivery — you didn’t sound amped enough. But, that will come with practice, and some of that is definitely a mixing issue... all in all, this was pretty cool. Definitely a good foundation. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals Last edited by Ajax; 04-12-2021 at 09:00 AM.

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