Predator & Prey

Adverse · 03-23-2021, 10:09 AM

I think you guys had a good energy and fed off of each other well, I also kind of liked that there wasn’t a definitive ending because the piece did better with the mystique. I liked the imagery of these “little prisons” and things like that. My favorite section was probably the ending I loved how well it was put together and ending on the scene of the deep snow was dope. That and the axe imagery gave me Shining vibes lol

Good work y’all

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03-23-2021, 10:09 AM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I think you guys had a good energy and fed off of each other well, I also kind of liked that there wasn’t a definitive ending because the piece did better with the mystique. I liked the imagery of these “little prisons” and things like that. My favorite section was probably the ending I loved how well it was put together and ending on the scene of the deep snow was dope. That and the axe imagery gave me Shining vibes lol Good work y’all