WEEK SEVEN: PHARAOHS ARMY 3-3 vs ADVERSE 0-1 ADVERSE WINS

[Objective]

P.A.: "the repetition of the word" culture" was used a bit much in the opening lines for me, beside of that I like where you're going with this. "Recong songs/recording long", repetition doesn't work here either. What you're saying is dope just not the way you're saying it sometimes... Try to refrain from repetition unless you got a crystal clear reason for doing so in a stylistic fashion, it doesn't seem to serve anything here, unfortunately. Story and concept is cool imo, spend a bit more time polishing and you'll have something solid. As it stands now with the repetition and at times awkward pacing which could be helped with a longer verse going through his 20s and the road to where he's at now. Relatable af, wish you had spent a lil bit more time on it though and posted some of a higher quality like I've seen you do in the past.

Adverse: cant really get restlessness/adventure is to flow off the tongue that well (it kinda works but... It's your opener,you know?) but I enjoy the intro and what you're saying here, just a bit lackluster in terms of execution. The next lines is better in terms of this.

Daily I learn the lesson as my hands are stretching for the stars
That this room’s become a prison, and depression’s standing guard
^dopeness, really enjoyed this couplet.

"up the halls/but these walls" would flow better than "but these four walls" imo. Like the content tho

Cool closure.

Vote: mvgt Adverse. The way he attacked this topic was a bit more fleshed out and conclusive than Pharaoh's, but Pharaoh's could have snatched it with a smoother pacing to the story and working on the kinks like repetition etc.

OK battle (I'm critical) cus I've definitely read better from both, and I think you guys know you've done better in the past as well.