Formation

Master Rock · 11-25-2020, 11:09 PM

I think back to the formulation of where my rhymes start
I'm composing vibes, the metronome beats to my heart
I want to paint a picture, a room with all the fixtures,
a world with all the pictures worth a thousand words
in a universe where a dream isn't deferred
however reality occurs,
in other words,
drifting with the wind,
I flow,
deep within the echoes,
double talk, rethink memento...

fraze · 11-26-2020, 04:23 AM

this is nice. i liked the pacing shifts.

ACTIVATE SELF · 11-26-2020, 11:53 AM

I like how natural and conversational this piece flowed. Dope switches between lines. Pretty philosophical. And maybe intentionally introspective in concept? Idk. But I dug it.

11-25-2020, 11:09 PM	#1
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	Formation I think back to the formulation of where my rhymes start I'm composing vibes, the metronome beats to my heart I want to paint a picture, a room with all the fixtures, a world with all the pictures worth a thousand words in a universe where a dream isn't deferred however reality occurs, in other words, drifting with the wind, I flow, deep within the echoes, double talk, rethink memento... __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

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11-26-2020, 04:23 AM	#2
fraze Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Louisville, KY Posts: 972 Battle Record: 14-24 Rep Power: 32898726	this is nice. i liked the pacing shifts.