WEEK 4: Eviction 0-0 VS FGR 0-0 FGR WINS

Adverse · 11-01-2020, 12:52 PM

Eviction has a concept of it, but needs some stronger concepts, more personal shit and just better wording because honestly Ghostface and graveyard were pretty okay. Read some of the veteran battles and take some notes fam.

Fgr had some decent stuff as well Friends was okay and end eviction was okay but I feel like you went Uber basic and didn’t do much with concepts because you felt like you had it in the bag. Good bars

V/FGR

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11-01-2020, 12:52 PM	#12
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Eviction has a concept of it, but needs some stronger concepts, more personal shit and just better wording because honestly Ghostface and graveyard were pretty okay. Read some of the veteran battles and take some notes fam. Fgr had some decent stuff as well Friends was okay and end eviction was okay but I feel like you went Uber basic and didn’t do much with concepts because you felt like you had it in the bag. Good bars V/FGR