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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Craigslist was cool rhyme was kinda a stretch but I’ll overlook
Friends 4K was cool Purple state was dope Closer was cool Mac had some decent ideas but seemed rushed Red velvet cake was one of those Treasure line was good, and also connected well Everything else fell flat to me, had some good ideas that lacked execution, you’ve showed you’re elevating but here you seemed rushed and the verse suffered because of that V/Top Illy |
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