|
10-07-2020, 08:10 PM
|
#8 | ||
|
Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 446
Battle Record: 8-4
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League
Rep Power: 5558447   |
This read like you were setting up for a series man. You painted a picture of a western world filled with archetypal characters with well chosen words and some nice compounds which helped the flow along nicely. I can see you're really elevating. It left me wanting to see where the story goes if you got in mind. The scene is set and the characters are there. Nice imagery. Good work.
__________________
Quote:
Quote:
|
||
|
| Tags |
| strongarm did it better |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Threaded Mode