Forgotten People

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Originally Posted by Adverse

This is great feed man thank you so much I want to do more like this but this was my first attempt at something of this variety. I know I don't have an amazing voice but I'd like to become at least technically proficient and be able to walk around a track like this blindfolded, I would love to collaborate sometime dude!

Your voice isn't bad. This song definitely used the right range for you and I was glad you weren't afraid of getting into the higher end of your range. It was really just the pseudo-guessing way you hit some of the notes. I'm not saying you have to be technically perfect, though. My feedback was just a way you could know where you're aiming better.

But yeah most of it was solid aside from the obvious 'recorded in the car' quality, but this obviously isn't a final mix or anything