Shadow Boxing Battle #6 - CLOSED

[Sharp]

Yo, I don't know who battler #1 is, but they dropped HEAT

Okay I'm not just gonna spam. Editing my vote in





you'll get wrecked from the jump and left with a lump//
I'm testing this chump.. looking like something I'd snack on for breakfast-or-lunch//
this is light. Dr Seuss rhyme scheme is about all you got going on
.. I'll punch you in the gut and make your intestines-combust//
and cut you into sections for an-adrenaline-rush//
.. I'm "dead-as-fuck", like having sex with dead infectious-sluts//
that I will shread you up into peices and "blend-your-nuts"//
again, rhyming, but its flow isn't as good as the opener. There an attempt at wordplay with 'dead as fuck' but it barely makes sense.
who'd defend this punk? he's soft.. he never wanted to battle//
he threw in the flag quick.. like gang affiliates-in-seattle//(.. lol, gang members in d.c area who live near, "the white house")
threw in the flag/protests is a solid idea but execution is so off... Also, Seattle and DC are on separate sides of thr country so something is waaaay off here
Im ready for war and dressed in my camou..
throw a grenade if I have to, and watch the shrapnel stick to your skin-like-tattoos//
'ca-moo'? I've never heard anyone say that. The stick to skin/tattoo is another cool idea that is butchered in execution
.. bullets'll hit you when I lift up my pistol//
.. leave you with so many holes, the air you breathe gon' make your body-whistle//
probably your best lines... Bar... I don't even know anymore.







Don’t got it in u to be mean; Ya loser DNA says it all
Tryna keep this L on the DL - Ain’t nuthin’ Bad boutcha but ya Cholesterol
okay
I’m winnin’ Easy and the truth might sound cruel
I’ll literally leave here & he’ll STILL take 2nd after the Bounce like a Ground Rule
fire
I’m finna stun ya melon if you wanna act raw
Nigga you’ll hear a Steve Austin entrance when I shatter that Glass jaw
cool
You gettin’ Fists, Kicks, Knees, damn the arsenal’s long
Plus I’m surgical with the bows: Tommy John...
okay
Drive By and as the spark creeps,
Nigga get Rolled Up on quicka than Barc’s sleeve during Shark Week
humor carries this for me
Yes I’m disrespectin’ this prick,
you’ll be a Sneaker Head as I put ya face to the curb & give u a Collection of kicks
solid


V/2 with harder hits, fewer misses, basic geography