07-28-2020, 04:46 PM | #1 |
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NBL Semi Finals - Adverse vs Wanderer {Wanderer wins}
12 lines due Sunday night.
Dont ask me for an ext. No EXT this shit has dragged out.
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07-28-2020, 05:47 PM | #2 |
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07-28-2020, 07:15 PM | #3 |
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07-30-2020, 04:02 AM | #4 |
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Ur lines a chore to finish. I’m determined to win & feeling a hunch
U not pulling out all the stops.. we just hope there’s one coming when reading ur punch U gotta make amendments unless all ur writtens are bit No shock if Adulter a lot. U gotta struggle to commit to that shit Shouldn’t vote on what u don’t understand. U feeling this scalding If they say NOTHING goes over ur head.. it’s referring to ur premature balding & chicks wish I did anniversaries.. I’m like fuck that shit it’s just weak If ur ever celebrating ur 1 year it’s the only 12 months ur bitch didn’t cheat Pay no attention & I come to urs duel wielding, be sure it’s hopeless Berettas beside u. weather girl side view; twin cannons in ur area draw ur focus Or it’s the uzi aimed. On ur knees pleading, all u need’s a prayer rug They say kill em with kindness. I’ll just squeeze til it click, that’s receiving a bear hug Last edited by Wanderer; 07-30-2020 at 04:19 AM. |
07-30-2020, 02:25 PM | #6 |
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I got the nine cocked if I see you in public it's on, believe me
Packing bullets that'll easily 'break Wand in Chamber' like Ronald Weasley Always close to success but folds under pressure, y'all catch his pitiful match with Dave? Once my ratchet spray he better pray he's half as good at dodging bullets as he is accolades Your punchlines are nickel-and-dime shit, whose playoff runs y'all think this boy thwarted? Skill wise you 'a quarter of Cash' you're only here because of the coin shortage Nobody wakes up in the morning thinking that they'll get shot today But once that gat pop it'll 'leave Wander off'd' like it grew legs n fuckin walked away You're in such a rush to lose this battle, man I'll give em mad props Ain't seen some1 'drop to waist, and rush a Verse' like that since ya bitch was tryna get my pants off I seen your pic, proportions are JOKES how the fuck you hold up that head? Wand's got such a pencil neck it's poetic justice once I'm at his throat with the led |
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Quote:
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Best line wins it My vote for adverse
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08-05-2020, 02:56 PM | #8 |
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pull out stops is an old one but ok
not feelin, adulterer balding is ok wasnt feelin 12 month twin cannons always like me a tittays line, decent bear hugger nahh coulda been better vs weasley was ehh musta missed the personal with accolades, ok random cash mention dont like it, concept coulda been done better wander offd was a reach pants off was off not feelin pencil neck seen adverse come wayy better, wand too but he had couple decent lines and took it v wanderer
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08-05-2020, 04:18 PM | #9 |
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Ur lines a chore to finish. I’m determined to win & feeling a hunch
U not pulling out all the stops.. we just hope there’s one coming when reading ur punch Nice opener U gotta make amendments unless all ur writtens are bit No shock if Adulter a lot. U gotta struggle to commit to that shit This is okas a name play and I haven’t seen it before but ‘if adulter a lot’ doesn’t work as a phrase Shouldn’t vote on what u don’t understand. U feeling this scalding If they say NOTHING goes over ur head.. it’s referring to ur premature balding nice & chicks wish I did anniversaries.. I’m like fuck that shit it’s just weak If ur ever celebrating ur 1 year it’s the only 12 months ur bitch didn’t cheat Lol decent Pay no attention & I come to urs duel wielding, be sure it’s hopeless Berettas beside u. weather girl side view; twin cannons in ur area draw ur focus Lol how do you even come up with bars like this? random but it’s cool Or it’s the uzi aimed. On ur knees pleading, all u need’s a prayer rug They say kill em with kindness. I’ll just squeeze til it click, that’s receiving a bear hug Clever but punch a bit wordy I got the nine cocked if I see you in public it's on, believe me Packing bullets that'll easily 'break Wand in Chamber' like Ronald Weasley It’s decent but wand angles been done too much imo Always close to success but folds under pressure, y'all catch his pitiful match with Dave? Once my ratchet spray he better pray he's half as good at dodging bullets as he is accolades Haha this is nice Your punchlines are nickel-and-dime shit, whose playoff runs y'all think this boy thwarted? Skill wise you 'a quarter of Cash' you're only here because of the coin shortage Decent Nobody wakes up in the morning thinking that they'll get shot today But once that gat pop it'll 'leave Wander off'd' like it grew legs n fuckin walked away Doesn’t quite read right but ends nicely You're in such a rush to lose this battle, man I'll give em mad props Ain't seen some1 'drop to waist, and rush a Verse' like that since ya bitch was tryna get my pants off Nice but drop to waist doesn’t quite work to describe ur opp I seen your pic, proportions are JOKES how the fuck you hold up that head? Wand's got such a pencil neck it's poetic justice once I'm at his throat with the led Led played but this is nicely flipped Pretty close here guys but I’m leaning Wanderer just for more consistent hits. Good stuff from both though. |
08-05-2020, 08:38 PM | #10 |
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Opener ( nice start..didn't hit hard but was a smooth ass jab)
Over your head Vs Dodging bullets Even tho I only quoted 2 and 1 ...there was decent jabs thru out.. those were the better I thought but like I said no real misses thru out both verse.. V wanderer
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