Rnd1- Zuch vs Wanderer {Zuch Wins}

[Sharp]

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
okay
I’m old school, that tiny head is reason to laugh
You’re putting on for a new era, and it’s a fitted, size three and a half
cool
you’ll bring up SC, go ahead and call it shame
You lose newbie tourneys, I’m the final boss for the Hall of Fame
did someone else call themselves the final boss recently? whatever. this is okay but a little bland for me
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
cool
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions
eh


Had a crack at NC fame but got hurt tryna dip ur toes
& Nasal up in ur thoughts like considering surgery on that nose
weird wording but fire concept. good bar
To me ur foreign anyway so I ain’t getting so hyped
now that tearjerkers hung around ur neck making u a French stereotype
I had no idea the stereotype of French guys with onions around their neck was a thing but it absolutely is. The 'hung around your neck' part gives me a little pause because that isn't really something I've ever heard used both ways, but I also didn't understand the French guys with onions
Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
not bad but wording is alright
&& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
I like this but the actual punch part comes out of nowhere. I think it could've been fire if it were prepared more. the setup is
'zuch's poor zuch's poor'
and the punch is
'zuch's poor... I'll kick your face off'

somewhere in there you could've set up the actual punch a little better imo. Even something like 'I wouldn't just foot the bill....' would make this a barnburner imo
Step & imma go Wild West. how u tryna attack??
Put the stick to ur jaw & spark, that’s a cowboy lighting a match
cool


I'm gonna hit up wanderer about the french stereotype shit cause I'm an uncultured american swine

EDIT:
I'm about even in quotes but I have zuch with the lotb being back to the future. It just game down to wording. Wanderer had some sick personal angles that didn't feel as polished, but that's a key for you. Really good ideas from Wanderer but zuch got it with wording. Dope battle guys.

V/zuch