Week 10 Championship Match: Orc 5-2 vs. Wanderer 5-2 ORC WINS

Adverse · 06-23-2020, 12:13 PM

I don't feel like this one is in need of a massive breakdown but was a decent battle nonetheless. Think part of the trouble getting people to vote on it was just how long the verses are and what not, think quarentine is winding down, people are finding their way back to a regular schedule and nobody is too keen on reading a long battle. Oh well playoffs are around the corner.

Orc - I enjoyed your whole Nickelodeon shtick, the Squidward/Timmy Turner/Jimmy Neutron was all cool, also liked the the "wander between sexes" line that was laughs, I'd of overused a bunch of nose bars and what not so props for being creative but nothing i was really feeling aside from that.

Wander on the other hand had a few okay bars, axed and left, sun tan lotion was okay and you almost had a hit with the opener, overall I think you could have done better here, but this was a cool battle

V/ Orc more consistent and a tad funnier. Good work y'all

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06-23-2020, 12:13 PM	#7
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I don't feel like this one is in need of a massive breakdown but was a decent battle nonetheless. Think part of the trouble getting people to vote on it was just how long the verses are and what not, think quarentine is winding down, people are finding their way back to a regular schedule and nobody is too keen on reading a long battle. Oh well playoffs are around the corner. Orc - I enjoyed your whole Nickelodeon shtick, the Squidward/Timmy Turner/Jimmy Neutron was all cool, also liked the the "wander between sexes" line that was laughs, I'd of overused a bunch of nose bars and what not so props for being creative but nothing i was really feeling aside from that. Wander on the other hand had a few okay bars, axed and left, sun tan lotion was okay and you almost had a hit with the opener, overall I think you could have done better here, but this was a cool battle V/ Orc more consistent and a tad funnier. Good work y'all