Week 10: evaD 1-2 vs. Enbombz 1-1 - Dave wins

Artifice · 06-21-2020, 07:03 PM

yeah I thought this was pretty close...

bombz opener was solid and his follow-up was clever too, peloton and hot wings I wasn't feeling, termite was cool imo... res bar didn't work for me, closer was decent.

evaD i liked how you took current events from the site and incorporated them instead of just generic punches, usually a good idea imo... thought the bourdain line was the highlight of your verse.

both had some hits and misses imo, and i enjoyed reading both. I think bombz opener was lotb (though the bourdain line from evaD isn't far behind it imo) but overall I enjoyed the creativity of evaD's punches overall a little more. Others may disagree, but for me...

v/ evaD

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06-21-2020, 07:03 PM	#9
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944949	yeah I thought this was pretty close... bombz opener was solid and his follow-up was clever too, peloton and hot wings I wasn't feeling, termite was cool imo... res bar didn't work for me, closer was decent. evaD i liked how you took current events from the site and incorporated them instead of just generic punches, usually a good idea imo... thought the bourdain line was the highlight of your verse. both had some hits and misses imo, and i enjoyed reading both. I think bombz opener was lotb (though the bourdain line from evaD isn't far behind it imo) but overall I enjoyed the creativity of evaD's punches overall a little more. Others may disagree, but for me... v/ evaD