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Old 06-20-2020, 12:33 PM   #1
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When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility
You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability
nice opener
I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts
ok
Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting
Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing
nah
You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet
The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps
nah
Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate?
Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray
cool I liked this
This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding
I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey
thats played
The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy
It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body
decent, execution hurt it
I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser?
Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User
ok
Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss
Given the # of floors you Make Shift,
you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause
no
You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted
U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button
no


2 good
2 ok
1 decent
5 misses


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They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is?
damn lol
Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life
clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe
nah
Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board
…Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force
good
Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all
But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall
ehh nah
Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees
that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines
decent
I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby
& After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body
fire
This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids
Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did
good again
Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent
When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt
nahhh
High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers
If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars
corny
You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics
Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches
nah


4 good
1 decent
5 misses


Pretty cool battle here, I expected barc to win and I thought he had it until I tallied the bars and saw username had more solid hits, both had the same amount of misses but user had the better hits.

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Old 06-20-2020, 12:40 PM   #2
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Barcotic

I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts

- Flow and multi's here were spot on.

You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet
The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps

- lol made me chuckle.

Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate?
Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray

- hate gun bars but this worked on multiple levels so it gets a pass.

The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy
It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body

- wordplay was decent but I'm feeling your flow and multi's man. Even the bars I left out were smooth in that department.

I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser?
Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User

- this was cool but could be worded differently - I don't think someone who seeks helps technically works on an abuser... . nitpicking, I know. But I like lines that work both ways flawlessly.

Good verse overall, flow was butter. Good multi's. I've seen better wordplay from you before but this still was enjoyable.


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They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is?

- lol good opener.

Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees
that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines

- haha. Made me chuckle.

This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids
Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did

- Clever way to flip your two battles this week.

Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent
When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt

- lol. I sometimes feel Barc isn't far off from this... or a school shooting.

You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics
Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches

- now this was a mental picture I could've done without lol... but savage all the same.

Cool verse overall, User. Flow and multi's on point. Damn you two reminded me I need to work on my flow and shorten up my bars in a battle sense cuz this was impressive.

So I got 5-5 here. Hmm. If I got to edge it to one, I gotta go with the one that had more wordplay in it... just a personal preference for me. This battle will be back and forth regardless.

Vote - Barcotic

Entertaining guys, thanks.
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