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Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 446
Battle Record: 8-4
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The spin your head like the exorcist line was a stand out here. Standard brag stuff but with a good flow and rhyme scheme to help the piece along. Lost count of how many I wrote drunk or high (probably because I was drunk or high). Some of the best stuff can come from when you're not in a normal state of mind. Solid bars. Braggadocious. Easy read.
Keep on keeping on. -6 |
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