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06-18-2020, 05:21 PM
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Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
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Based on someone you know? It came off as a personal one. Nice, simple but heartfelt wording about a topic seldom touched upon. I felt you could've gone on longer with this but it was nice for what it was. If the subject is your crush you should show it to her. Nice work.
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